Comments on: Haiku Friday, Vol. II

By: jenefur

jenefur — Mon, 23 Jun 2008 19:56:23 +0000

My sis was pregnant,
kid fingers bellybutton,
‘Eww, baby stinks, baby stinks!’

You almost had it. Almost.

jesseybean — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 04:50:35 +0000

I just came across
Your post now, and though, his name
is Smell my Finger

I’m glad you are here
But I have to be honest
That was a bad one

descksoon — Thu, 12 Jun 2008 12:55:26 +0000

Iron Man was great
So was Sex and the City
Kung Fu Panda rocked

Forgetting Sarah
Whatever-her-last-name-was
A funny movie

betme — Tue, 20 May 2008 16:03:07 +0000

If Matt gets too big
swelling like a big balloon,
stick a pin in him.

(sorry Matt… )

Don’t say “sorry Matt”
He deserves to get pin prick
He likes it, even

Taoist Biker — Mon, 19 May 2008 13:51:55 +0000

Damn. I meant “A new commenter.” My first haiku and I blew it on the first line!

First impressions are everything.

Taoist Biker — Mon, 19 May 2008 13:51:21 +0000

New commenter
Stopping by to say “hello,
Nice place you got here.”

Thanks! You almost had it…

Peter Parkour — Sun, 18 May 2008 18:39:14 +0000

Haiku Friday two
Now I will make my debut
I hope folk don’t boo

That was very good
You even rhymed, and you should
If only they would

Red — Sat, 17 May 2008 13:24:25 +0000

Glad Im not swollen
For I have beaten the bloat
Will return in June.

June is almost here
After June will be July
This one is real dumb

Matt — Sat, 17 May 2008 00:31:05 +0000

Friday much better
Than Monday could ever be
Tuesday just plain lame

Wednesday is hump day
Some would argue that that makes
Wednesday best of all

schmutzie — Fri, 16 May 2008 14:52:18 +0000

Sweet! Thanks!